Style is 0 because it's JV's... >_>;
Though I sort of graded it low, I still liked it. My suggestion is to be less lazy on the animation, don't just tween. Do some frame-by-frame work and take your time, then get better voice actors, try the guy from Salad Fingers, I'm sure he could whip something up. Or don't do voices at all and just have eery music and nice SFX, since it might ruin the reader's perception of the character's voices when they read "Z?".